i don't really wanna say what you should change in the text i would more like too see you look at it and maybe figure out what could use, more explaining, i will look into the text one more time, to get more of a vibe what i would like to see be explained more, but i hope you can see it for your self :)

on the spelling mistakes, well not that big of a deal you missed "Frank wants to his friend’s house", should have a go to, in it, and also, hum now i forgot the other ones.. i will edit it in after i read it again..


-Cf

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